Pepsi Commercial C4D

Its very good , The Material looks very good and the general feeling is a very bright and colorful one which is a good message to convey
I didn't like the camera motion though (or perhaps the lack of) .. I learned from someone I just started working with that you shouldn't have the camera stand still , even if its the slightest of motion the camera should always be moving .. That's what he told me and he convinced me ... You need better camera shots .. Maybe something from above , Something from below , Something that shows the tip of the metal can with reflections and all and the Globe in the background with some DOF . Its endless .. Render 10 Different Cameras and then composite them in After Effects , Edit them to the music because the music is very energetic while the camera is very static and the editing is lacking ... Also you could zoom in on some of the details you added like the line that orbits the globe .. Its a shame it didn't really become clear what it is until it was over because to me it looked like a lower third rather that what it should look like

Anyway you did a great job with the modeling and the materials and now all it needs are some good camera shots